ビリビリ

New genre, water sex :)

Thanks for another release.

The flat chest wears an Epic Bikini in this one. It is most delicious. Thanks a lot, Biribiri and Raikoh.

Thank you for this new treat, Raikoh and biribiri..! Damn, this doujin is cute…

@Afro Thunda

Ye goddesses, Afro..! I’m about to go to work, and you just had to mention that delishush detail…

*salutes and calls in late*

I absolutely love Kiriyama, and that bikini is truly Epic. The monster-liquid sex was rather unique and very well done. All in all, another amazing chapter. Thanks a lot biribiri and Raikoh.

One quick thing I just noticed (I guess the artwork distracted me), shouldn’t that phrase be “Hohoho well, well.”, with the Hohoho part supposed to be laughter? It is missing the o at the end.

Just a minor thing, but I figured I should mention it.

@Zathael
Not exactly. It’s just a simple 2-syllable chuckle. The extra “H” is there in order to make you hold out that “oh” sound for a little longer. Much more obvious to a Japanese person reading the Japanese version. For us English speakers, we’d usually see it as “Hoho~” (or with the dash mark) to get that same effect.

I’m a bit confused. If you are trying to translate this into English, so that English speaking people can understand it, why use the “H” at the end if only people who are Japanese would understand it? If as you say, English speakers would see it as “Hoho~”, then why isn’t it “Hoho~”? It just seems rather odd that you are translating a Japanese manga into English, but are making it so parts of it can only be understood by someone who is Japanese.

Not trying to be critical, just very, very confused.

I only said it would be more obvious for a Japanese person reading the Japanese version. In any case, that’s a translator thing. Just look at it as a simple chuckle, you’ll be fine. It certainly isn’t something that’s gonna change meanings drastically through translation.

Sorry, It was something like 4am when I posted my question. Chalk it up to me being very tired and babbling on about nothing important. Thanks again for this chapter.

I liked that this arc got continued. You don’t see something like this every day. I just found the sex to be rather tame. Maybe it’s because there wasn’t much nudity or maybe it’s because of the lack of a well-defined phallic object :D. But the story alone makes this arc worth the read.
Thanks biribiri and Raikoh.